Now that you have 5 big paragraphs describing the Ancient Greek city-state, you can revise them! There are THREE revisions you need to make in your 5 paragraphs.
Self or Peer Review your paragraphs for Ideas, Support, & Organization. Get the yellow and purple review sheets from Heather. This should make your draft all colorful with pink, green, and blue.
Change all your verbs in the simple past. Reference the table in your Humanities notebook. Remember your city-state was in the past, in Ancient Greece! All you need to do is cross off the old verbs and write in the past tenses. DO NOT REWRITE YOUR FIRST DRAFT!
Change all first person sentences into third person sentences. For example, "I decided to have . . . " into "The government/city-state decided to . . . " OR "My city-state is located in . . . " to "The city-state of Heatheropolis is located in . . ."
At this point, your first draft should look like a big mess. That means you're ready to start typing! Remember your USB drive!
Reading Log #5 and Say What? Journal Response #5 are due today. They should show your reading for April 5 - 11. Make sure they are in your Independent Reading folder IN the classroom.
*REMINDERS*
Reading Log #6 and Say What? #6 are due on Monday, April 19.
Thinking Reader #3 is due on Wednesday, April 21. You can get those sheets in the IR bucket.
After reading about the differences between ancient Athens and Sparta in chapter 27, use the notes to help you create a system of education and economy in your own Ancient Greek city-state.
DUE on Monday, April 12, 2010
Paragraph 4:Economy & Trade(1 full paragraph)
Will your city-state trade?Why or why not?
What goods will you produce and trade?
With whom will your city-state trade these goods?
What do you predict you might need from other city-states?Think about what you lack.Talk to others in class to see if there is anything they produce or grow that you may need or want.
What kind of money does your city-state have?What does it look like?What do your citizens use it for?
Paragraph 5:Education (1 full paragraph)
What does your school look like?
Who attends the schools? (Think gender, age, etc.)
How long are your citizens required to attend school?
What do they learn there?How does their learning benefit your city-state community?
Welcome back from spring break! Remember that big reading project we are working on? Make sure you hand in the following assignments by Friday, April 9, 2010.
Reading Log #4
Say What?#4
Thinking Reader #2
Reading Project Commitment #2
Remember! You must choose a different reading project than the project you completed last marking period! Read the project description carefully so that you complete it correctly. It is worth 100 points!
Urban Planning: Design Your Own Ancient Greek City-State
You will begin a portfolio of an Ancient Greek city-state based on the notes we have been taking in class.You may choose the characteristics of your city-state, but it must be recognizable as an Ancient Greek city-state.Write one paragraph per page.That means you will have three pages with one paragraph on each.This is a first draft.
DUE on Wednesday, April 7, 2010
Materials
Your brain
A pen
Three sheets of loose leaf paper
Your Ancient Greece folder (with ALL the notes)
The internet
PARAGRAPH 1: GEOGRAPHY (1 FULL PARAGRAPH)
Where in Ancient Greece is your city-state located? What are its physical characteristics and topography? Use your vocab terms!
Why did you choose that location? What advantages do you think it has? Disadvantages?
Draw a map of the location and boundries of your Greek city-state.
PARAGRAPH 2: AGRICULTURE (1 FULL PARAGRAPH)
What crops will your city-state grow? Where?
What animals will your city-state raise for food? Where?
How does the geography of your city-state’s location influence how you grow your crops and raise you animals?
PARAGRAPH 3: GOVERNMENT (1 FULL PARAGRAPH)
Identify and describe the type of government your city-state has.
Why did you choose this type of government?
What role do leaders have in the government? What role do citizens have in the government?
What advantages and disadvantages does it have? Whom does it benefit? Why? Who suffers? Why?